applying to a scholarship provided by RentHop apartment. I have finished the scholarship essay. I need to revise this essay to make sure that I have answered the prompt and make a compelling essay. This is a competition, not a class, so please give me con

applying to a scholarship provided by RentHop apartment. I have finished the scholarship essay. I need to revise this essay to make sure that I have answered the prompt and make a compelling essay. This is a competition, not a class, so please give me constructive criticism if you feel need. I will attach the essay for review